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Gavin Onasi
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 Post Posted: Tue, December 12th 2006 06:33pm    Post subject:
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going back to 3rd person, its much better

Gavin just watched as the security grabbed the mans arms and stun cuffed him. He almost felt bad as it isn't the most pleasurable experiance..."Don't worry, with the needed information we can release you and no harm done. Now, when did the experiment take place? And what happened that led up to the virus turning this people into monsters? What were the first symtoms?" Now the only thing Gavin had to hope for was the truth... and this matter could be cleared in less then two hours.
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 Post Posted: Tue, December 12th 2006 06:42pm    Post subject:
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"No one will be doing anything to the facility," he echoed over the ship's comm. Nubis, at some point during the chaos which enveloped the facility, had safely returned to the Ambigram and opened a hacked communications channel to the Firestorm. "My name is Nubis Serin. I am the president of the corporation which owns and operates the facility you see through your viewports. Any damage done to the facility will be considered criminal and any such losses, including mortal losses, will be placed on your shoulders."

He clicked off the comm before a response could be made. Nubis could not recount what had happened after he collapsed on the floor of a hallway within the facilities labs. Not even the images or sounds which filled his thoughts were memorable.

A bottle of pills lay at the bottom of the trashcan at his desk.

"Pilot, prepare the ship. Coordinates have been sent to the bridge." Nubis made his way to his desk, taking a quick glance into the bottom of the trash to where the pills were. A few had spilled out, dotting the bottom of the can with tiny green hints of light. "And pilot, contact my aides. We're selling the company."
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 Post Posted: Wed, December 13th 2006 12:50pm    Post subject:
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Shit, Nubes was alive. Rimmer thought. "The experiment took place a couple of hours before I left, in the sealed area of the ship. It'd take the infected people at least 5 hours to get out of that area." Maybe. "I have no idea about anything else, I only saw the people after they were made into these creatures!" he indignantly tried to get out of the grips of his captors. "Do you think I would have come aboard if I thought I'd infect you all? Or taken the girl, too?" Nubes was alive, Nubes was alive, Nubes was alive...
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 Post Posted: Sun, December 17th 2006 02:08pm    Post subject:
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Gavin sighed, the man was probably telling the truth "Alright, let him go" the men let go and backed off "Now, what do you want us to do to you? Or do you plan on leaving?"
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 Post Posted: Thu, December 21st 2006 05:36am    Post subject:
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Sorry dude, I didn't see that you'd posted!

Hmm. With Nubes gone, he was free of that stuck up maniac, and his zombie infested dungeon ship. He had a kickass ship, a cargo hold full of guns, a small fortune and an ex-secretary who was actually rather nice.

Back to the old life, then. "I think I'll leave, Territorial Commander Onasi," he replied, trying to remember the man's title, "If that's all the same to you?" He scratched his head. "With Nubes out in dark space with a crate full of zombies, I guess I'm not an employee of IINC any more. Unless you could give me a lift to wherever you're headed?"


Let's have dinner, as Mr Jax suggests :P
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"Unfortunately, I have been given secret orders" Onasi replied "I am sorry, but you must be on your way. If you need repairs, food, supplies, we can help you. Beyound that, it is up to you."


You have a hyperspace ship right? :P
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 Post Posted: Mon, January 08th 2007 12:38pm    Post subject:
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Rimmer shrugged. "Can't think of much, thanks, Captain." Onasi flinched slightly at the misranking. Heh heh. "Wait, do you have a fiver?"

Incredulity. "A what?"

Earnest need. "A fiver," Rimmer said, slowly and carefully, as if he was addressing a child. "Five credits."

Uncertainty. "Not on me, no."

Rimmer let his face fall, and placed a reassuring hand on Onasi's shoulder. "You need a better job, mate," he said, and turned for his ship. Hopefully Sandra or Clarissa or whatever her name was had put some champagne on ice, and then they could make their merry way to Denon, or Adarlon, or Coruscant. Somewhere fun.


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 Post Posted: Mon, January 08th 2007 06:23pm    Post subject:
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Unforutnatly, I am a billionare :P
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 Post Posted: Thu, January 11th 2007 08:04am    Post subject:
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Orders to bridge: Take us to Shilli, drop off Onasi


Finally, the Revolution can occur. Now, with myself at the head, the true government can take power! May my fellow National Socialists unite with my at Shilli. We have work to do.
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